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The Enormous Crocodile
The Enormous Crocodile was rude and cunning.He gets scary and nasty.The Enormous Crocodile had giant teeth and was brave.He was cruel and evil but his plans always failed.He was ugly with an attitude.The Enormous Crocodile was hateful and bad.He’d always eat children and he’d be beastly and had strength.He is villainous.
By Varin
Muggle wump!
Muggle wump is a monkey of “The enormous crocodile” Book. He is very kind caring and full of energy. He tries to stop the crocodile in the book. Muggle wump is brave, he is strong, he is mostly happy and is fun! Muggle wump is friendly and if someone is hurt or scared or worried or needs help Muggle wump will come charging in. Muggle wump is very clever and sneaky, noble and smart. He’s very gentle and full of love for one another. There is one time when he gets furious angry cross and rough and that is when he sees that someone is trying to hurt kill eat or do something that is not very nice to someone else. Muggle wump is very adventurous, determined, expreseve, enthusiastic, fearless, friendly, honest, independent, knowledgeable, loyal, passionate, reliable, responsible, supportive and wise. Muggle wump is really cool!
By Olive
